Have you ever seen the sales guys on TV? I'm sure you have... They're loud and in your face, and they always have the best mop or knife or whatever.
For your response this week, I'd like you to write a "script" for one of these TV guys. He'll be selling an IRB you've read. Make sure to include plenty of details to "make the sale."
For your comment back, please let the person know:
1. Whether you'd buy the book based on the sales pitch.
2. Why you would or wouldn't buy the book using specific details from the sales pitch.
3. What other details you think should be included to help make the sales pitch stronger.
Subscribe to:
Post Comments (Atom)
Hey Matt Gugliemo here with Found by Margrett Hadix. This book takes you on an endless journey through time and space. After you read this you'll be thinking twice about who you really are and if certain things are even possible so call and order today.
ReplyDeleteIm not sure if this is the right kind of advertizement but this is what its like on tv.
ReplyDeleteAre you looking for a fun and exciting book? One with relatable characters and a capturing plot that both boys and girls can enjoy? Well look no further. You should buy the Warriors Series. The Warriors Series is really cool. Its what all the kids are talking about. Everyone will love reading it because it has animals with personailties. Also, its not just one book, there's over 20, so can keep reading! So what are you waiting for? Buy the warriors series, its the awesomest book you'll ever read!
Call 1-800-blahblahblah to order. The warriors series cost money plus alot more for shipping and handleing. :)
Holes
ReplyDeleteThe best book you read better than all those sloppy books.This is written by the most famous author Louis Sachar. This is a special order it's only $5.99 plus sales tax. Cheaper than all the stores like Borders or Barnes and Noble. All you do is call 1-800-HOLES. Yes call that number. If you call in the next ten minutes, we will offer you a complimentary book mark for FREE!!!!!! Just remember call 1-800-HOLES.
hi ms sills can you write an example i dont get it
ReplyDeletewould you buy the book called wait till helen comes ?
ReplyDeleteyes I would buy the book.
why would you buy the book?
I would buy the book because it is a ghost story and i love ghost stories.
How much would you pay to buy the book?
I would pay about 15.00 to 20.00.
-TYHASIAH BELL-
This book is filled with twists and irony as well as the sacrafice of luke castellan to save olympus and the whole world by stabbing his weak spot (achilles heal)and therefore killing himself (kronos)and saving the world.Unlike other books ,this one is filled with greek mythology. This book is filled with adventure and lots of action
ReplyDeletehello! Its Julia spanburgh here talking about the latest and most hottest book "the bermudez triangle" by Maureen Johnson. This wonderful and inspiring book is about three senior girls experiencing their first summer apart and a lot can happen in 10 weeks. while Nina is away at a collage camp and meets the guy of her dream Mel and Avery have some secrets bottled up about there past. so parents this book will help your child learn about how its okay to be yourself and to not let anything change you. this book is on sale for $8.99 at borders and if you call now you can get a free bookmark just call 1-800-800 again order now and get a free bookmark the number is 1-800-800.
ReplyDeleteAre you tired of reading the same old books? Do you long for a story that will keep you on the edge of your seat? Well, the book The Lightning Thief is just what you are looking for. Unlike most books with predictable storylines, you never know what is going to happen next in The Lighting Thief. How could you when you are reading a book about the son of Poseidon? This story reaches out to all types of people. It has intense action scenes for boys and a love story for girls.
ReplyDeleteWhat is the story about, you ask? It is about a twelve year old boy named Percy, who just discovered that his dad was the god Poseidon. Percy also discovers that he is the key factor in an approaching war between the Titans and the Gods. He travels on a quest that brings him from Mt Olympus, to the underworld. The best part about this story is that just when you think the book is over, there are still four more books left in the series. You heard me—four more. So get off your couch, rush to the phone, and order a copy of The Lighting Thief today.
If you call the number on your screen in the next ten minutes you will receive 20% off. Operators are standing by to help you.
Ms. Sills- We're supposed to write a script??? Like a play or something??? I'll wait until some other kids comment, because I don't get the assignment.
ReplyDeleteBTW-"Mop or knife or whatever", That's really funny. I'm serious. I'm laughing right now.
ha-ha-ha!
PEACE OR RESPECT OR WHATEVER (LOL)
-Emily Green X Artemis Luna
Hi, i am here to tell you a litte bit about the new book "New Moon" part of the "Twilight Series".The book contains about 180 pages.This book is just like the movie but better.First of all the book has more details in it...such as what happened to Jacob in an alternative ending of what the movie didnt show.The book would cost about 18.99 plus shipping and handling and also sells in bookstores near you.Trust me i would definatly buy this book.Call now and we'll double your offer.That means two "New Moon" books for the price of one yes two "New Moon" books for just 18.99 plus shipping and handling.
ReplyDeleteDan Brown, author of two of the most popular books of all time, The Davinci Code and Angels and Demons, has released yet another stunning novel. In his latest blockbuster, The Lost Symbol, returning protagonist Dr. Robert Langdon receives a mysterious phone call from a man claiming to be Langdon's mentor, Peter Solomon's, assistant. The caller convinces Dr. Langdon to travel to Washington D.C. Later that night, Langdon realizes he has become the victim of a devious plot, and he is forced to do the bidding of a maniacal antagonist in order to save his old friend's life. When the head of the CIA becomes involved, Langdon is called upon to endure extreme measures in his search for truth and enlightenment.
ReplyDeleteIf you're looking for more than just an evening out, or an adventure that leaves you wanting, try spending some time with Dan Brown's latest masterpiece - The Lost Symbol. Rich with dark Masonic rituals and symbology, the mysteries of Noetic science, and the unveiling of the secrets of the Masonic pyramid, The Lost Symbol leaves readers on the edge of their seat for the entire thrill ride. Faced with exciting and completely unpredictable plot twists and events, the reader is forced to try and put this book down! Take it from me, John Wendt, the voice of modern literature, you won't be disappointed. And if you call now, you can receive the luxurious box set, featuring all of Dan Brown's thrillers for just 29.95! Call now, because an offer like this won't last long!
Hi! have you ever felt all moods at one time?.Well it's a really fun expierence. You should read the book Twilight! It's a very good book has all the things you have ever wanted in a book! romance, action, comedy, EVERYTHING!!!!!!. So make sure you buy it now!.
ReplyDeleteEmily and Todd - take a look at Noah's and John's responses as examples. Some of the other responses were on the right page with the "sales lingo," but they didn't give details about the book. If you think you may fall into this category, please feel free to redo your work!!!
ReplyDeleteTristin Krueger here I have an awsome new product that cant be beat! Its called the Eragon series bychristopher paolini. With nonstop action and detail this is our highest sale yet. this will book will have you wondering if magic and dragons are real.
ReplyDeleteHi my name is Ashlyn Sagarin. Are you bored of reading non-fiction novels that your ELA teacher assigns you. Yell put that book on George Washington down and read Warriors Into the Wild by Erin Hunter. Take it from me it's awesome. The book is about a kittypet named Rusty who wants to go out in the woods looking for adventure. But what he doesn't know that there are more than just woodland creatures running aroun on the forest floor. So go to your school library today and check it out.
ReplyDeleteIf you are board or just looking for something cool listen to me. White Fang, this fresh and dazzling book is great if you don’t take this deal I will. Why sit around all day when I’m pretty much throwing this great deal at you. If you’re asking what is the big whoop well I will tell you this book is mixed with emotion and for all those animal lovers out there the main character is a wolf/dog. Being attacked and abused every turn he makes and still gets through it. It has action and adventure. So get up off your lazy but and dial this number. Be one of the first three hundred to call and get a second copy free.
ReplyDeletePlus shipping and handling
Are you ready to be amazed by one of the best book in the world.Im here tell you why it is.Well first the name of the book is Tom Clancy's End War.The reson this book is the best out thare is it is a New York Time's number one seller.Another reason is that it is the best you can get action,fighting,Drama amd GOOD!So get out and get the book NOW!!!
ReplyDeleteDanny I think I would probably purchase your book but I think you should tell me how many pages are in the book so I will know how long it will take to read it. But other than that you did a good a job describing what it was about.
ReplyDeleteNoah Markewitz
ReplyDelete1. I would so buy The Lightning Theif.
2. I would buy the book because I love action and romantic things.
3. Noah I think you should of added little more detail about how he found out and why he found out.
Noah Markewitz I would buy your book because how persistent you are and so straight forward. I think it sounds like a great plot because of how you say like it will keep me on the edge of my seat and say how I will never guess what’s going to happen next.
ReplyDeleteCan you handle the gossip? Do you want a book that no ones in, and things are not what they seem? If you do then The Clique was made for you. Unlike other books you never know what is coming until it happens in The Clique. How would you know what’s coming next when anything that could happen does? It is a page turner that you don’t know how The Clique will end out until the very end.
ReplyDeleteThe story is about a girl named Massie who has everything, money and a Clique to go with it she has been the star of the show for as long as she remembers, but her life turns upside down when a friend of her father’s family come to stay in her guest house until they earn enough money to get a house of their own. The new family has a daughter and a son, the daughter; Claire is the same age as Massie who could be the new leader of The Clique if Massie doesn’t watch her back the other four girls with be pushing her out. So if you want to see what happens next grab the phone and call right now, operators are standing by.
-SAMANTHA cARTER-
Danny you make me want to but the the book the way you discribe the things that happen like all of that sacrafice. but you could tell us some more on what happened.
ReplyDeleteDo you ever get tired of the teacher yelling at you for reading the same book over and over again? Well this book will make you want to keep reading it over and over again; the book that you want to read is you MONSTER. This book will keep you on your feet ready for every turn that it gives you. You would never lose the excitement in this book. This book will never let you know what’s going on especially with a young adult on trial for a murder. This story is about an 18 year old and his name is Steve Harmon. He went on trial for going to a gas station at the wrong place and at the wrong time. If you reply in the next minute that you read this you will get a 30 percent off the book. Shipping and handling also applies when you buy this book.
ReplyDeleteHi! I am here to talk a little about the new On the Run book "Now you see them,Now you don't.This book will knock your socks off and leave you at the edge of your chair wanting more.This story is about a boy and a girl named Aiden and Margeret Falconer whos parents are serving a life sentence for helping terrorists.Well thats what everyone thinks.But now the Falconer kids are out to prove there innocence because an asumed F.B.I agent needed there help and once they were put on trial he diappeared.If your interested call now at 1-800-5696 to order.The cost of this book is 15.99 plus shipping and handling.CALL NOW and will double your offer.That means two On the Run books for the price of one.CALL NOW!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteHey, are you looking for a book thats funny,sad and slighlty scary? Well then try reading Suicide Notes. The dark humor will give you comic relief as you read about the sad, long story of a very confused boy. Not enough? How about this, join 15 year old Jeff ,who finds himself waking up in a psychiatric ward on New Year's day, on figuring out the reason why he was sent to be with the "nutjobs", not minding the bandages on his arms. Its sadly funny and very suspensful. It keeps you guessing one way, then the other, until the very end! So, if this incredibe novel by Michael Thomas Ford sounds like a great book for you, then get it right away for only $14.99!Plus shipping and handeling. You won't regret it, and if you do well give you a refund! so call now and find yourself reading the book all day and night long. Please call now, or purchase it at a bookstore near you.
ReplyDeleteHave you ever fell asleep reading a boring book?well you will never fall asleep on the book take offs and landing.It has all the basic good book attributes. It has your awesome plotline and charecters that are ebarassed and living with there grandparents.It will keep you on your toes funny at times but serious at others.Get this book befores it sells out for a small price of $4.95. No assembly required.
ReplyDeleteJasmine Michels if I was the buyer I would not want to go run out and get the book right away, because it does not give the buyers enough detail to let them know what the book is about. I think that you should add more detail to your sales ads. Make people want to go out and buy the book right away. You should also add some detail on the book for people can know what they are going to buy
ReplyDeleteHey Noah, if I hadn't read the whole "Percy Jackson and the Olympians" series already over the 2 months ago,(waiting for the 5th book was torture!) I'd so buy the book from you!
ReplyDeleteI would buy the book The Lighting Thief based on the Sale pitch Noah wrote, I would buy The Lighting Thief because it’s for both boys and girls, I get bored reading the same type of book over and over again, I want a book that will keep me at the edge of my seat, and it’s not over until you read the last book. I think the sale pitch would be stronger if you let the listeners get hooked on to the book want to buy it, but also let the listeners hanging, so they want to see what happens next.
ReplyDelete-SAMANTHA CARTER-
If you like books with adult situations and a lot of suspense then When She Was Good is a perfect book for you to read. It has jaw dropping storylines. Crazy adult situations but it mostly reaches out to girls.
ReplyDeleteThe story is about a girl named Em whos mother passed away, Her father is an alcohlic and her abusive sister pamela takes Em and runs away so they wont have to live under their stepmoms rules. Now pamela has passed away and Em is all by herself. And has to live on her own. How will she be able to cope with out any source of parenting? This is a one book series and is absoulutley amazing. Dont let this offer pass you by. You can get this heart wrenching book for only 5.99!!! So get off your butt, grab the phone and call now! If you call right this second you'll get a second copy for FREE!! The number is 1-800-0000!! Get your copy NOW!!!
I wouldn`t read the book that danny suggested because it doesn`t sound apealling to me and it wasn`t explained how its good.I suggest to you danny may be add more details and tell us the name of the book.
ReplyDeleteJasmine I wouldn't buy your sales pitch because maybe people doesn't like moods and you don't tell enough information about the book. I think you should put more details in there. For example add who the author is and write about how the moods affect you when you read. Also add why is it a fun experience.
ReplyDelete-Would I buy the book twilight?
ReplyDeleteyes I would because its a book with action, comedy and romace and I like to look for those types of qualities in a book.
-Would I buy the book based on the sales pitch?
Not really there really wasn't anything to the sales pitch it was very short. And I would like to know the price of the book. And the number to call so I can get the book. I would also like to know if it were a series book because I enjoy reading books within a series. But other than that the sales pitch was good.
-How much would I pay for the book?
Around 10.00-25.00 depending on if its a book that i really want.
Ms.Sills im redoing my response
ReplyDeleteAre you looking for a book that makes you think past our everyday lives and makes you think about who you reallky are? well then Found is the book for you. It is about a 13 year old boy named Jonah who was adopted and knows he was adopted all his life. Then Jonah and his friend Chip began recieving wierd letters with no return labels. The letters read "You're one of the missing" and " Beware they're coming back to get you". So if your ready for an action packed thriller that leaves you on the edge of your seat order now! And if you order in the next 20 minutes you will get this amazing book for 50% off so order now!
Danny based on your comment I would not buy the book because first of all you didnt mention the name and you give away the ending. I've read the book and I know its way better than you put in your response. Maybe you should mention that Percy is the son of Poseidon and that he has a prophecy that he will either destroy or save the world on his 16th birthday. And then put in reasons why people should buy the book like how suspensful it is and how its leaves you wanting more even after the last book is over.
ReplyDeleteAre you looking for a FUN, FABULOUS, AND FASHION book to read? Will I have a fabulous book for you, the book is called A girl like moi. The book is about a girl name Imogene, Imogene is into fashion it is her dream to have her own fashion brand and to go to Paris to see all the famous and expensive brand names. But I guess dreams don't come true since her parents said she can't go to Paris with her aunt. So in order to make money to go to Paris she signed up for a paid internship at Hautelaw fashion company In New York. At Hautelaw there are some brutal co-workers and some nice ones. While in New York Imogene found the love of her life. There's always drama in life and you have to face it somehow. Well, now your about to see Imogene's.
ReplyDeleteHAY ALL OF YOU SITING ON YOUR BUTTS GET UP AND GET THE BEST BOOK EVER ‘THIRSTY’ CHRIS NEEDS TO BE A NORMAL TEEN BOY. AVOD HIS PARINTS AND MOST OF ALL GO ON A DATE WITH THE MOST POPULAR GIRL IN SCHOOL.BUT ONE PROBLEM HE WONTS HER BLOOD HE IS CHANING IN TO A BLOOD SUKER. SO GET UP OFF THE COMPUTER CHAIR AND BUY IT GO GO GO GO!!!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteTROY-no i would not buy your book. why becous troy is not talking about the book just the price and the page number. you shoud have sayed what was on the back.
ReplyDeleteShannon here, coming to you with a book called "The Hunger Games." This book is filled with action, many unexpected twists and turns, and an ending that will blow your mind. The characters are easy to relate to, which makes this the perfect book for girls OR boys! This book also has many descriptive words, which makes you find yourself turning page after page non-stop!
ReplyDeleteThis book is about children that are chosen to be put into an arena, where they have to kill each other, and eventually someone will come out as the winner. But the forces of nature in this arena are controlled by computers, which calls for unexpected twists and a captivating story.
Are you interested yet? If so, call 1-800-GAMES!
John, that was an excellent summary of the book, The Lost Symbol. I would buy it based on the details and amazing vocabulary you used. However, I know if you aired this as a commercial, you would lose most people with words like "protagonist" and "antagonist". As a sales pitch, you might want to exclude those words. I do like the way you ended it by saying "Call now, because an offer like this won't last long!". That is an amazing price for three books, so I would want to buy it just based on that price. I can't think of any other details that would improve your sales pitch. Great job!
ReplyDeleteHey im here to tell you about the book A serious of unfortunate events by Lemony Snicket. I would buy this book because, It's the type of book where you dont know whats going to happen next, and it just makes you want to keep reading and reading it. Also it's an enjoyable book, so you should go buy it now before they run out.
ReplyDeleteAre you getting bored of reading the same boring books? Are your eyes hurting from looking at the print squished onto a page. Well you dont have worry anymore, Ellen Hankins books are what your looking for. With Poetry lined pages. Exciting, yet mystorious stories. You'll never get bored! They're
ReplyDeletegreat books for ages 12+. For both boys and girls. 5 additions Burned, Crank, Impluse, Glass and Tricks. They are all slight depressing, but always end with a happy ending.
Why buy these books you might ask? I'll tell you right now you'll always learn something new, and you wont ever want to stop reading. The books are great so why not buy one? See what you think of them. Dont just sit there call right now.
Noah-- I think I would buy your book because it sounds really exciting. I think your sale describes the characters very well and makes me want to find out whats going to happen. It make it sound even better when you said there was even more books in the series.
ReplyDelete(Ms.Sills Im redoing my response.)
ReplyDeleteHas this ever happened to you? "I can't find a book because there all so boring!" Well don't let that be you. Cause we have a book with relatable characters and a capturing plot that both boys and girls can enjoy. What book is that? Its the Warriors Series! Enter the world of the forest cats and join Rusty, a brave cat who dreams of the forest, as he grows into Firestar, legendary warrior and clan leader. Its great for kids of all ages, for animal lovers as well as anyone who loves action and adventure. The Warriors books capture their readers, and soon you'll not be able to put it down. It'll make reading fun! So what are you waiting for? Call the number on your screen to order the Warriors Series. And if you call right now, you'll get the whole entire series for only 29.99! This offer isn't available in any store!
Varitta,
ReplyDeleteDid you finish your response? It looks like it was cut short.
Did you ever heard of The Series of Unfortunate Evernts? If you have heard of this story then I bet you will still have many question's in mind like who is Lemony Snicket? Is there a secret organization I should know about? There are all different thing you might question that will be answered and many more! Some question's will still be left unknown but other's will be figured by you reading the book called "Lemony Snicket: The Unauthorized Autobiagraphy." Think about it it is the author writing an auto biography! Everything will be at 7.99 and everything you see here will be in a package just in 3 days!
ReplyDeleteNoah, Now you made me want to get the book "The Lightning Thief" and see what will happen in the story. I liked the part when you said call the number on your screen in the next ten minutes you will receive 20% off. I thought that, that was an impressive idea and the information that you gave us was making me want to buy the book immediately.
ReplyDeleteHey all you people out there! Victoria Carroll here with the best series in the world! The Twilight saga . Vampires, Werewolfs,and a human girl stuck in between. You'd love them, bookworm or not. You'll get trapped inside the exciting events and keep your fingers turning those pages until the end.All four fantatic books written by Stephanie Meyer are so amazing you can't put them down. Call today and get a free Edward poster! 1-800-twi-light
ReplyDeleteShannon I would read The Hunger Games after reading your avertisment.
ReplyDeleteI would buy it because of the way you gave just a little about the book not telling me what would happen just telling the scenerio leaving me wonder what will happen. you made it sound so interesting.
I just think you should of included a little more about the actual story. but it was really good.
-Noah
ReplyDeleteI love your second sentence is a question it would really make me wanna keep listening to the comercial. I also like how at the end, you end it with operators arr standing by it catches my attention and sounds like a real comercial I see on T.V.
Hello, I'm about to tell you about a great series. It is called "Percy Jackson and the Olympians" There are 5 books, The Lightning Theief, The Sea of Monsters, The Titans Curse, The Battle of the Laberynth, and The Last Olympian. It is about 3 teens, Percy, Annabeth and Grover, who fight off Titans and many different kinds of monsters. Some of these monsters include Hydra,Harpies, and Minotaurs. Percy is the son of Posieden but he does not know that yet. He will have to fight Gods, go to Olympus, and hold the world on his shoulders, literally. Order in the next 10 minutes and get all 5 books, a 35 dollar value for 34.99!
ReplyDeleteShannon
ReplyDeleteI would definatly by The Hunger games. The way you describe it make me want to read it. It sounds so cool that people are in an arena and the nature is controlled by a computer. Nothing can be improved in this so you are all set.
Hello everyone, would you like to buy a book that is so outrageous and a perfect story!! Well you can.... its called the clique novels by Lisi Harrison.
ReplyDeleteThank you everybody hope you love the book bye
-MYCHALA CONTI!!!!!
Varitta, I really think your book sounds good. I think if this was a real advertisement I would go buy the book.
ReplyDelete-MYCHALA CONTI!!!!!!
hi ms sills I wanted to re write mine so here it is.
ReplyDeleteHey everyone would you like to own a book that is outrageous!! this book is called THE CLIQUE its a series so theres more books but let me tell you about the book. One day a girl named claire and her family have to go live with her dads best friend from school. Claires, dads best friend is the dad of Massie is a rich, fashion diva that is so spoiled. When Massie meets Claire she cant believe it. Claire was dressed in overalls and a turtle neck, Massie thought this was a FASHION DISATER!! so her and her clique decided not to like Claire. When you read this book you will be on the edge of your seat!
thank you and go buy the clique now.
-MYCHALA CONTI!!!!!!!!
Yes Ms.Sills I did finished my response. Ashley your book sounds really interesting. I would buy the book from you because it sounds funny and I love funny books. But I also would not buy it because the details are a little too short and I wish you would've end the sentence with a cliffhanger so it would make me really want to read the book. I would give the book a try.
ReplyDeleteBilly Maze here and I'm back from the dead. I'm here to tell you about this fabulous product. I'm here to talk about the Legend of Drizzt series. This is a fabulous book and I would definatly keep on buying them. These books are about a young drow brought up in a dreadful society based on death and treachery. He is the only drow that can see the error of drow customs and beleifs and wants to go against his way of life and live on the surface with people who aren't EVIL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This is a wonderful book that I find really interesting and think you should read.
ReplyDeleteAre your books dull, boring and predictable? Well if you want an exciting new book, then read The Gallagher Girls series. This book will not disappoint. Instead of reading about a normal person going to a normal school read about Cammie, 14-year-old a girl that knows fourteen languages, breaks CSI codes for extra credit and can kill a man with her bare hands seven different ways. But when Cammie finds herself dealing with a normal boy who thinks she's a normal girl, someone who's trying to kidnap her and life-threatening missions Cammie's life isn't normal, even for a spy. Get the first book in the series for only $8.99, if you call in the next ten minutes we will give you Ally Carter's whole series for $29.99. That's three books for 29.99. Call Today! 1-800-SPIES.
ReplyDeleteThis is my second comment:
ReplyDeleteMichaela, I'd buy your book too. I'd buy it because you had added a number at the end of the script which makes more like a sales pitch and the books are about little animal warriors. Though to make it better I would add what the conflict of the whole series is about or write a little summary about the first book so more people get interested. It might help.
Noah, I would buy this book because it is really good. I have already read this book in the past but your description of it makes me want to read it again. I have always loved Greek mythology and since this book is almost entirly based upon it I think this is one of my favorite series I have read.
ReplyDeleteCassie,
ReplyDeleteI wouldn't buy your book because you advertisement didn't tell me what the book is about; although I liked the way you said that Louis Sachar was famous. You could also mention Holes the movie. If you just tell the conflict of the book and then leave the viewer hanging you would probably convince me and others to buy it.
-Kim Guthrie
Troy-I'm sorry to say, but New Moon has WAY more than 180 pages. Actually, it has over 445 pages, if I remember correctly.
ReplyDeleteHI MS. SILLS!!!! PEACE 2 ALL,
-Emily Green X Artemis Luna
Hey there, looking for an interesting book then how about trying "The Giver".Its about a boy named Jonas whos life is perfect,has no fears of anything and no pain untill the giver comes with memoires of pain and fear.now its time for Jonas to feel the pain.
ReplyDeletevictoria- i would love to give the twilight saga another look.id be happy to read about vampires,warewolves, and that one human girl.i have read the first book twilight and thought it was interesting but now i think you've got me wanting to read the rest.(;
ReplyDeleteTroy, based on what you told me, I would definitely buy the new On the Run book; it sounds like a thrilling read. Your pitch was especially alluring when you mentioned that Margaret and Aiden's parents are facing a life sentence for assisting terrorists. Now, I am itching to know what happens to all of them!
ReplyDeleteHowever, if you wish to strengthen your pitch, then might I suggest that you make your opening a bit more informative. You could mention some interesting information about the author himself (including his name), and other great stories that he has written. For example, what other On the Run books has he written? I'm not sure if this is a series of books, or a sub-title. You did a great job overall, and I'm looking to buy!
Hello! Dorothy Thieme here to tell you about a book called "The Reptile Room". Of course I would buy the book! It's so exciting and it's kind of crazy! There are so mysterious things going on in this book. Lemony Snicket (the author) is so funny and the way he wrote the book kept wanting me to keep turning to the next page! So if you're interested please call- 1-800-reptile room... today! WAIT! There's more! If you call in the next 15 minutes, we'll tripple the offer! That's two books and don't forget, two book lights! For one payment of $14.99 with NO shipping and handling! CALL NOW!
ReplyDeletemichhelleex5-
ReplyDeleteI love happy endings so I would probably buy the books. I'm not so sure if I would buy them because of how you said they were a little depressing. Michhelleex5, I think you should add a little more detail about the books but other wise, your sales pitch was great.=)
Ashley - I would totally buy that book because you said it was funny, sad, and a little scary which is just my type! Also, you told enough about the story without giving too much away. It makes me want to see what happens at the end. I think you just could've added a little bit more about what the overall story was about. But other than that, it was good and I would buy it!
ReplyDeleteVictoria I would so buy your book! I fell in love with the Twilight saga. I liked how you bribed the reader with the free Edward poster. When I was reading yours it felt like I was really watching TV.Most TV spokes people lie about the product but yours was all real because it is full packed of romance and adventure.
ReplyDelete-Julia Spanburgh
Michelle ...I would buy your book series because you made it sound like it was exciting and a really good book to read. Like not one of those boring books that when you read the page and like nothing happens. But you make your book sound good.
ReplyDeleteAre you tired of reading the same old books all over and over again you can get the warriors series books for 12.99 dont waste your time and call right now at 1-800 warriors.
ReplyDeleteI agree with michaela because i will the buy the warrior series book for 29.99 because it is a good action book because they are always fighting.
ReplyDeleteHi, I'm Kaitlyn Talmage here with the #1 New York times author of "My Sisters Keeper" with the novel, "Handle With Care" by Jodi Picoult. This novel is about a child named Willow O'keefe who was born with a rare disease called OI(Osteognisis imperfecta). Her parents have to pay for the things that the insurance company can't. The insurance company can't pay for a lot of things. So the O'keefe's are practically poor. Willows mother Charlotte is suing her best friend, getting a divorce with the only one who makes money for the family, along with that she has a daughter Amelia who cuts herself, cuts class, and dyes her hair blue. This book has lots of suspense. You may never put it down.
ReplyDeleteMatt, I would buy your book because you said that it would take me on an endless journey. That really grabbed me. I liked the part when you said you’ll be thinking twice about who you really are. I wouldn’t buy your book because you didn’t say so much about it. I have no clue what it’s about and I’m not sure if I want to read it. I think you need to add more of a summary.
ReplyDeleteDO YOU LIKE BOOKS WITH HARD UNPREDICTABLE CHARACTERS? THEN YOU SHOULD TRY THE BOOK BORN TO ROCK!!! THIS BOOK IS SO REALISTIC YOU WOULD THINK IT ACTUALLY HAPPENED IT STARS LEO CARRAWAY AS THE SON OF THE PUNK ROCK LEGEND KING MAGGOT THE LEAD SINGER FOR PURGE. AND IT DOESNT USE MADE UP BANDS OR ANYTHING THERES THE STEM CELLS, THE SEX PISTOLS AND MANY MORE. WITH THIS BOOK THE END WILL BE THE FARTHEST THING FROM YOUR MIND.
ReplyDeleteI WOULDNT BUY NOAH'S BOOK BECAUSE IT SOUNDS SO INTERESTING BUT I DONT LIKE THE FANTASY PART I LIKE STORYS THAT COULD HAPPEN IN REAL LIFE NOT ABOUT THE SON OF POSIEDEN WHO HAS TO FIGHT A WAR FOR THE GREEK GODS.
ReplyDeleteThe book Eragon is a awesome book to buy because its the perfect book for someone who likes fighting and magic.Plus its ideal for twelve year olds.
ReplyDeleteOwen I think I would buy the book because you described it good and I like the desciption of the book you gave me.But I think you could have made it a little more convicing on why to buy it.
ReplyDeleteDo you like books with tons of suspense, excitement, and fantastical events? If you do, Daniel X is the book for you. This action packed book is about a young alien hunter named Daniel. He has the greatest superpower in the world. THE POWER TO CREATE. This book is packed with action and suspense that will make you want to read more. So if you like books that will keep you on the edge of the seat untill the end, you will love this book.
ReplyDeleteJeremy, i would totally buy the Legend Of Drizzt series based on what you said. It sounds exciting and interesting. When you said that he was the only drow who could see the error of drow customs and he wants to live in a world with people who arent evil. That sounds like an exciting story and it sounds like the book is cool. You should of added more details like what the drows name was, and what was so bad about the drow customs that made him change
ReplyDeleteHey Nick here with the book Holes. Holes is the number one book of the year! Written by Luis Sacher over 3 million coppys were sold. If you want a book that you can never put down than holes is definatly for you. So buy it now for just one payment of $9.99 plus shiping and handling.
ReplyDeleteNoah,I would definitely buy the book your advertising because i really like books that keep me on the edge of my seat and it sounds like something i would like to read.
ReplyDeleteHey Noah, if I hadn't read the whole "Percy Jackson and the Olympians" series already over the 2 months ago,(waiting for the 5th book was torture!) I'd so buy the book from you!
ReplyDelete-TYHASIAH BELL-
Hi Maria Anderson here with the book called 'TWILGHT'! Are you the type of perosn who likes reading, but only the books that make you never want to stop reading? Well, do I have the book for you! Twilight is about a human and a vampire that fall in love. It's a romantic love story for ages of all kinds. But wait, dont leave just yet. If you become addicted to this book like millions of other Americans, there are three other books in sequel also by Stephenie Myers. This is a great oppertunity so act now! Buy the Twilight Series!!! You'll never want to stop reading!
ReplyDeleteDorithy T.~
ReplyDeleteI wouldnt buy your book because you didn't tell me what it was about. If Im going to buy something I want to know the subject of it. However, I do want to know more. 'The Reptile Room' sounds like a good title.
Would you be lonly and sad if your mom died and you're dad was a huge nba star but he doesnt belive that you are his son/daughter?Well guess what it happened.At least in my book it did, miracle on 49th street. Hi,I'm Mike Lupica and I want you to check out my books.I am the author of Heat,Travel Team, and my best book Miracle on 49th street which is about what I said in the begin.You have to get it,if you dont than thats because its to good for you.This sporty adventure will keep you entertained,amused,and it could even give you a challenge.Those who read because they are forced (school)willl read for joy ,this is garanted.So go get it.
ReplyDeleteCassie,im not sure if I would buy you're book.The reason for this is because you didnt really tell anything about the book so the reader doesnt know what they are going to buy.I really thing you should add more detail to you're commercial and maybe even make it a little longer.
ReplyDeleteHello everybody, why don't you try out this new product!? It's called an,"Automatic Dishwasher". It washes dishes with the push of a button. It's on sale now for 50% off.
ReplyDeleteI would buy Danny's book off of the sales pitch. I would buy the book because it sounds very interesting. Another thing I would include is a sale percentage off.
ReplyDeleteHello and i'm Nicky Herzog with the book Warriors Into the Wild. This book includes everything a reader needs. It's exciting and as the reader you get pumped up and you want to read more. In the warriors series there are 24 books so you'll never have to worry about finishing the series for a long time. If you buy the first one we will give you the second book free. But an even better deal would be if you buy the first two we will give you the third one free and no shiiping and handling. If you call the number on the screen in the next 5 minutes we will ship you the fourth book free!
ReplyDeleteMatt i would buy your book based on the sales pitch because its makes me think the book you are trying to get people to buy sound good. I also like how you said that you would be thinking twice. I think you could have included maybe some deals to get someone to buy it or maybe a phone number so like if they call on the next 10 minutes they will get a better offer
ReplyDeleteAre you bored with the books you’re reading? Tired of the same old story, just re-told again and again? Well, stop reading that boring old book and pick up this one! Eoin Colfer’s “Airman” is a story filled with suspense and adventure, from the opening gunshot to the final sword thrust. It’ll keep you on the edge of your seat, waiting for more. It has a princess in distress, a ruthless villain, hysterical supporting characters and a brave, smart hero. It’s an action novel, a comedy, and a romance all rolled into one!
ReplyDeleteHmm… What is this story about, you might wonder? “Airman” takes place in the 1850s on two islands near Ireland called Great Saltee and Little Saltee. This story is about a boy named Conor Brokehart, who was born to fly, almost literally. He was born in a hot air balloon flying over Paris. He dreams of building the first “heavier than air” flying machine with his teacher, Victor Vigny, who was flying the balloon when he was born.
But, terrible things are stirring on the island of Great Saltee. A group of trained mercenaries called the Red Guard are bent on assassinating Victor and the king of the Saltee Islands, King Nicholas, who is like a second father to Conor. When the terrible deed is carried out, Conor witness it. He is knocked out by the mastermind of the plot, the evil Captain Bonvillian, dressed as a soldier, and blamed for the crime. When Conor wakes up, he finds himself on the prison island of Little Saltee.
Conor knows that his lifelong friend, Princess Isabella is now in danger. She is next in line for the crown. Conor is determined to save her before it’s too late, but first, he must find a way to escape the horrors of Little Saltee, something no inmate has ever done before.
Does this book sound like something different, new and exciting? If it does, call 1-800-AIR-MAN1 today! For just $10.99 (plus shipping and handling), you can receive “Airman” which will give you HOURS of enjoyment! Call now and you will receive TWO copies of the book today, one for you and one for a friend! WOW! TWO for the price of ONE! Oh! But we’re not done yet! If you call NOW, we’ll take 15% off the $10.95 shipping and handling fee. Call today!
Bria, I would buy that book based on your sales pitch. It sounds really good; you did a great job explaining what the book was about. I think that maybe you should include more about why the book’s good though. Did it keep you on the edge of your seat? Did it make you cry? Other than that, I really can’t think of other improvements to your sales pitch. Great job!
ReplyDeleteR.L. Stine in fact is the greatest author in this time who has written many great books like Say Cheese and Die!; Be Careful What You Wish For; Monster Blood; and Night of the Living Dummy.
ReplyDeleteA fine artist who rank among the greatest and well known artist has one book that stands out named The Stepsister. The Stepsister is a mysterious and intriguing drama style that would keep you glued to each and every page. In fact there is no other book like it that brings out the personality of each character. Pages of blockbusting drama that could create chills and heart stopping surprises. The protagonist Emily and her sister Nancy had lost there father, a boating accident and there mother gets remarried. Shocking things started to happen like peroxide placed in shampoo bottles and murder. Then on a family trip they discover there is a murderer in the family. Give yourself a reading experience call 1-800-order it.
Amanda Baron here with the best book ever. Have you ever read the book Blue? If not you should. It is a great book. It is fun to read and very exciting too. No matter what type of books you like this is the book for you. Everyone likes it. It's about a boy who turns into a marlin! What's better than that? The answer is nothing. If uyou call now at 1-800-BLUE you will get the book for $9.99, when it normally costs $19.99, plus $4.99 S&H. It's a great deal! So call me right now at 1-800-BLUE!
ReplyDeleteDorothy, I would definetly buy your book. I would buy it because you get 2 books and 2 book lights for just $14.99, that's a great deal. To make it stronger you should have added a little more information on what the book is about. It was a great sales pitch though!!!
ReplyDeleteSarah Grassi here, and im going to tell you about a series of books that will change your life! Have you ever picked up a book and within the 1st 3 pages you already know how the book is goin to end? Well not with The Series Of Unfortionate Events, you never know whats goin to happen next in this book, wheather its working in a hotel at 1 years old or being traped in a submarine. This is a limited time offer : call in the next 3 minutes and get a free copy of the 1st book "The Bad Begining".
ReplyDeleteNoah, wow you did a great job you really made me wanna buy your book by telling me how that book reaches out to all types of people because most people dont all like the same books. I think you should have introduced yourself in the begining because thats usually what the people on t.v. do.
ReplyDeleteMicheala I would buy your book because I allways cant find the right book because there all boring. I'm going to see if they have that book in the libary so I can get it. Thanks!!! Maybe you can list some of the names of the books in the series.
ReplyDeleteAre you tired of reading the same old boring books time after time again? Then grab Fablehaven one of the greatest books of all time. With twists and turns all through out the book. There's somthing for every one, action,and scary, cool yet mischievios cretures for boys. For girls, cute and amazing mythical creatures including fairies, women dressed in amazing clothes and a water nimph that became human. Theres lots of suspense in this amazing plot. Whats this book about you wonder. Well its about two kids, seth and kendra who visit there grandparents when they find out that there granpa sorenson is the caretaker of fablehaven a preserve for mythical creatures. once allowed to know the secrets of fablehaven seth and kendra meet a witch who is bound and angry. Along with schemeing satyars who like breaking the rules. then on mid-summers eve seth is warned not to open the window no matter what..... but he does and chaos is unleashed. Then when you think the book is over theres two more waiting for you. so call the number on your screen now and enjoy some amzing books! Call in the next ten minutes and get 50% off and no shipping and handling what an amazing deal!
ReplyDeleteNoah I would definetly buy and read the lightning theif. It sounds like a great book you let me know important details without giving away the whole book. I really like how you let me know that theres more books. Something that might make your sales pitch better is if you mentioned the love story for the girls in your summary.
ReplyDeleteDo you like books about magic and wisardrey ? If so then Harry Potter And The Sorserer Of Stone is the one for you .Magic wands. Spells,and out of this world things .you cant put it down .its magical and it makes you want to read more. - CLAUDIA RUPP
ReplyDeleteJasmine,I might be interested in buying your book because because you said it is comadey , romance , and action .
ReplyDeleteBut I think your sales pitch would sound more interesting of if you told that edward and bella has a deep romance and that it involves vampires -CLAUDIA RUPP-LUNA MIRABELLA - PEACE AROUND THE WORLD FOR GENERATIONS
make up monday- Do you want a fun,exiting,and classic book like "Doll In The Garden" or "Wait To Helen Comes" two original classics or if your looking for a fun and exiting book with mystery then check out chain letter that will leave you with a mystery that will freak you out.
ReplyDeleteDo you want a interesting,fun,difrent kind of book? Well you should try the Twilight series. I think anybody would love to read this book about vampires and how he is in love with a normal girl.This book will make you always want to read whenever you can. You should really buy this awesome book and if you love it buy the whole series!
ReplyDeleteJulia, I would order your book on how you sales pitched it, I liked how you also said you can get a free bookmark also.I would buy the book because Julia gave me details about the book and told me some information. It got me interested. To make the pitch stronger Julia should have talked more about how the parents would like their children to have the book. But i would buy your book, great sales pitch!
ReplyDeleteIn the getting Air Jimmy, David, and Henry are on their way to fame. They are flying to California where they hope to get sponsorships from skateboard companies. Unfortunately their plane is hijacked by terrorists. Feeling that they are the only people who could save everyone the boys spring into action. They use Jimmy’s titanium skateboard and literally beat the terrorists to death. Unfortunately the terrorists have already killed the pilots. After they crash into the Canadian wilderness, there are only six people on the plane left alive: Jimmy and his sister Julia, David, Henry, an airline attendant, and a lady from the knitting club named Mrs. Herschel. Now the survivors must find food, shelter, and water as they struggle to hold on until help arrives.
ReplyDeleteDorothy, I would buy your book because you tell me what type of book it is(mystery).I like mystery books because they leave me on the edge of my seat.But one thing you need to do is explain why it was funny.
ReplyDeleteKaitlyn I would buy your book because it seems like theres alot of stuff going on and you never know whats gonna happen.
ReplyDeleteIf your looking for a awsome action packed book, your at the right place.this book the hardys go on a mission to find Rex halbjornson to give him insurence money, but they find thereselves in the middle of a kidnapp sceeme.
ReplyDeleteresponse: hey javier. I think you starte very good, but you should give some detail about the book.
Did you ever heard of The Twilight Saga? If you have never read this you've probably heard about it and wondered why people talk about it so much. There are 4 books in the Saga ( Twilight,New Moon,Eclipse, and Breaking Dawn ) The storys are about a girl and a boy who fall inlove but his a vampire and she's not. So are you intrested ?! If you call now You will get the Twilight Saga for 14.95 ! ( not solded in stores )
ReplyDeleteHello, Its Cassiy Brown here and the best books around town are the "Diary Of A Wimpy Series"!! It will take you on a journey through a normal kid name Greg Heffly's life. Its about a kid has all of these problems with Girl crushes, money, friend, and more. These halarious book series you just dont even want to put the book down, trust me i read the books. If you like funny books YOU HAVE TO READ THE DIARY OF A WIMPY KID SERIES!!!
ReplyDeleteParents get ready for the best deal ever and here it comes. Your child can learn the A,B,C in a snap just like that.The deal comes with a book, three CD's for a long car ride and a DVD version. See, watch and listen to the best deal ever for a low price of 15 payments at $3.99 each plus shipping and handlng. Call now and the first 20 customers will receive a free folder for the book,CD's and DVD. Call now 1-800-277-4653.
ReplyDelete-Michael Mckay
Matt, i would totally by your book because i love thrillers, but i dont really know whats going on in the book. i just love the part when you said 15% off now (lol)!!!!!!!
ReplyDelete-cassidy brown
Kim
ReplyDeleteI would buy your book. Your summary of the story definitely sounds exciting and not dull, boring or predictable.
-Michael McKay
Hi my name is Kadijah Booker and im here to tell you about a book that will both shock and leave you sitting at the end of your chair. The book that i am going to tell you about is called Holes. Holes is one of those books that will leave your eyes glued to the pages. This amazing book will only cost you the low price of 10.24. Make sure you run out and get your copy of the book. This book contains 240 pages of pure greatness.With this book you will travel with the main character Stanley Yelnats through his adventure at Camp Greenlake where mysteries will be unveiled.
ReplyDeleteCALL NOW and we will not only send you one copy but a second one FREE yes you heard correct FREE.
Katie T I ould read buy your book because you did a good job describing what happens in the book without telling too much about what happens.But i would like if you told how much the book cost and how many pages it has.
ReplyDeleteThe Watsons Go to Birmingham-1963:
ReplyDeleteAre you tired of boring historical books? Fiction books that dont make sense? Well the book that is right for you is right here (Shows book that is in hand) Tada! The perfect book you will love: "The Watsons Go to Birmingham" by Christopher Paul Curtis. This book is historical fiction. This is a hilarious book that you will love! Meet the Wierd Watsons...thats what their neighbors call them. You will go on a funny and historical journey when you read this. If you want this book call 1-800-WATSONS for a low price of 16.95,(plus shipping and handling)but if you call right now you can get free shipping and The Watsons Go to Birmingham-1963 Audio Compact Disc.
-Nicole Pieta
For your comment back, please let the person know:
ReplyDelete1.Yes, I woulod buy your book
2.I would buy it because of the good details you said and it sounds good, the price is the best
3.I think everything is good you really dont need to make it stronger.
-Nicole Pieta
Do you like a book about friendships, Secrets within the friendship, and drama? Then you might like the series Camp Confidential by Melissa J. Morgan. These books are full of friendships, secrets, and drama. Between getting lost in the woods, camp closing and being extras in movies, every book will making you want to read more.
ReplyDeleteThese books are about some girls who meet at a camp and become best friends, each one keeping a secret from one other. The first book in this series is Natalie’s Secret, it’s about a girl who lives in New York City but when Natalie’s mom makes her pack up leaving her fresh sushi for the fresh air of sleep away camp for then summer Natalie’s summer can’t get any worse. Soon after arriving at camp, Natalie realizes that despite the spiders in the showers, she has made some cool friends (and boyfriend?). Right when things are going Natalie’s way, her looming secret appeared right in front of her, now what will everyone think of her…or even worse what will Simon think of her? Will Natalie’s new friends be mad? What will happen next?
You can buy the first book in the series for a reasonable price of $4.99 in the U.S. or $7.50 if you live in Canada.
Julia-
ReplyDeleteThe Bermudez Triangle sounds like a book I would read sometime this year. Based on your sales pitch, it made the book sound interesting. I thought that you could of used a few more details in your sales pitch, to make in sound even more interesting though.
Michelle H.
Hey you, do you enjoy reading? Do books bore you?If so I've got a book for you. "The Time Travelers Wife" is a New York times best seller. It's about a fight for love.It tells how time can't conquer all but love can.Heny Detamble a man who started timetraveling after his mothers brutal death lives a dispicable life.At the age of 27 he meets a woman named Claire Abshiree who knows him from her past.She saves him fom continuing on with his horrible life. Unable to recall her he realizes she is part of his future.Henry is unable to controll when he leaves the present time.He often leaves Clare behind on his travels making the relationship strained. It's filled with action,love, adventure and whole lot more. Get this book and readin wont be a stuggle it'll be your passion.
ReplyDeleteKaity i would totally buy this book you really sold it. It seems like it has a lot of tension and plenty of suspense like you said.it seems like this disease is really destroying the family so id want to see if it'll all change.
ReplyDeleteBritney Nappe here. I'm here to tell you about an awesome book called The Center of the Universe by Anita Liberty. If you like excitement, then this is the book for you! This book is about a teen who gets into a lot of trouble. She fights with her parents, does drugs, and she finds out what life is really about. This book can be yours for $12.00. Just call 1-800-Liberty.
ReplyDeleteAlly, I wouldn't buy this book based on the details you gave. You didn't put your name in it, I don't know how much it is, and I don't know where to buy it. I like your details about what the book is about.
ReplyDeleteDo you like exciting, suspenciful, page turning books? then "snapshots" is the book for you! in this book Jen mysteriously disapears and willy doesnt know what to do with himself. But does Willy know ssomething that the police dont?
ReplyDeletejavier i wouldnt buy the warrior series because in your "sales pitch" you didnt give enough detail.
ReplyDeleteAre you desperate for a new book? Longing for a book with humor and has lots of adventure that keeps you on the edge of your seat? If so, read Fantastic Mr. Fox, written by beloved author Roal Dahl, who has wrote several classics such as "Matilda" and "Charlie and the chocolate factory".
ReplyDeleteThis wonderful story is about Mr. Fox who steals food from the three meanest farmers in England. Farmers; Bunce Boggis, and Bean are seaking for revenge. They won't stop until they kill Mr.Fox. Only the greatest plan can save him now. Will Mr. Fox be able to bring himself and his family to survival? Can Mr.Fox outsmart the farmers? Read this truly fantastic book to find out. Only $4.25 and can be bought wherever books are sold.
Hi Zack here and don't I have a spectacular book for you. This book is The Seeker. The Seeker is a very action packed book. It is thrilling and suspenseful at the same time. A real page turner that will keep you on the edge of your seat. All ages will enjoy this book, and for under ten dollars it is a real bargain. It would make a great Christmas gift for the reader in your life.
ReplyDeleteTyesha, I would not buy your book based on your response. You didn't say anything that would have me hooked into buying the book. You also didn't give any information about the plot or the characters.All that I learned is that wait for hellen comes is a ghost story. Maybe you could use phrases that would make your response more like an advertisement other than a book reconmandation, like this book is filled with suspense. You could also say a little bit about the plot, having me waiting to find out what happens next. Hope this helps! :)
ReplyDeleteAre you interested in reading? If you do, pick up and call to get a copy of the first book in the Cirque Du Freak series: A Living Nightmare. Of is written by Darren Shan. It is about a young boy who goes to a freak show in town with his best friend. One of the performers' name is Mr. Crespley and he has a magnificient spider named Madam Octa. Darren is a big fan of spiders and he needs to have her. So one night, he goes to try to steal it and he does without being caught. It response to a flute so he has to learn it to play with it. While his friend is over, something goes wrong and the spider bites Steve. While he is in the hospital, Mr . crespley finds Darren and gives him two options. He becomes a half- vampire and he saves his friend, or he says no and let's his friend die but M. Cresply takes the spider back. Of course he accepts it and his friend is saved. But now as a half vampire he has to travel with Mr. Crespley and become his assistant. To take a trip with them is call this number and you can get your own book.
ReplyDelete(Operators are standing by.)
Troy I liked the way you gave descriptive writing and that drew me in. It seems full Of suspense since their parents are serving a life sentence. I would definetly buy it at that price because it sounds so good. I wouldn't buy the book because wit seems to me that you didn't put a lot of summary into it so I know nothing about it.
ReplyDeleteTyhasiah - Please redo your comment. Right now you don't have any credit because you copied from someone else's work. For the record, this is called plagiarism, and college students are expelled from school for committing this offense.
ReplyDeleteHave you ever read a novel that wasn't that injoyable. Well I found an joyable novel and it's " After th Rain" by Norma Fox Mazer. It's about a 15 year old girl who is a worrier and who worries about whether her family understands her, whether her friends like her, and whether she'll get her first kiss before her 16th birthday. This book wilmake you surprised or maybe sad.
ReplyDeleteKayla Ormandy
Hi I’m Kylie Harris here with the book Titanic the Long Night by Diane Hoh about the unforgettable disaster. The book is full of romance, heart, thrill, and lots of non stop action. So if you like those qualities in a book then I would most definitely pick up the phone right away and call now to get your own copy of this outstanding book. Hurry we only have a certain stock of books and there going quick.
ReplyDeleteKaity,
ReplyDelete1. I would definitely buy your book
2. I would buy your book because I like to read books in that genre also because you made the book should really interesting.
3. I would try and grab the listener more.
I thought your pitch was great I would just do #3.
Hey Sarah Nine here with the second book from the Twilight series coming to tell you that this book is the cheapist you'll get it and its the best of its kind> Its pages are rip resistent and iits hard cover is actualy hard like a rock so be sure to be it for just 19.95 but call now and recieve this second copie free.
ReplyDeleteKenny I would buy your book because your sales pitch was good. I also would buy it because you gave a lot of detail in your sales pitch.You might not have wanted to say call this number and then not give a number.
ReplyDeletedo you like books? what kind of books? there are so many different kinds, running loose is one of my favorites it is suspense full and exciting and a great book for all readers,and it is about a hight school student that realizes that he is not willing to play football for his school team because they asked him to cheat he faced many challenges trying to find out who he is and what he wants to do. he finally found that it was his destiny to run track
ReplyDeleteCassie ~ i bet holes is a great book but i wouldn't buy it based on the amount of money it is i want to know details like were it took place or what took place in the book
ReplyDeleteCassie,
ReplyDeleteI wouldn't buy your book because you did't explain what it's about and why I should buy that book. You just random things.
Kayla Ormandy
Hi, I'm Kaitlyn Berry here with the #1 New York Times bestsellers "DIARY of a wimpy kid dogs days". By Jeff Kinney. This book is about a kid named Greg Heffley that no one likes or gets along with except his neighbor Rowley. It has a spot of humor. The main character Greg, a self-confessed "indoor person" is inside during summer vacation playing video games with the blinds closed. This book is only 13$ and if you buy now get half off. This book will make you laugh at anytime you will never want to put it down.
ReplyDeleteKaity,
ReplyDeleteI would definitely buy your book. you give great description that makes me defiantly want to read the book. I would next time try to sell it more.
-Kaitlyn Berry
Hi my name is Todd Brewer and today an offer will be made that is irrasitable. For only 19.95$ you can have the hatchet series written by Gary Paulson. In these boks a boy named Brian Robeson faces the challenge of surviving in the wilderness after his plane crashes on his way to see his father. Brian faces variuos types of challenges like hunting for food, making a shelter, and keep from being the pray. If you like suspence and action thrilling books this is the book for you. Critics call it " a novelty for the whole family." New York Times craves for more and sais its the book of the year. call now and recieve a second copy free and a painting of the forest.
ReplyDeleteSarah i would definatly not buy your book because it shows nothing about the book and your low detail discription shows me nothing about the book. sorry and no thank you!!!
ReplyDeletehello,have you ever wanted to read a book that has mystery and wonder but that one book that just has it all.i suggest that you buy notes of a near life experiance it has to do with a girl who has a loving family but has trouble later in life with her parent fighting her brother moving further away dad keeping secrets what could it all add up to in notes on a near life experiance buy it now at a store near you.
ReplyDeletehye eva i would buy your book the time travelers wife because you explained how it happens and the main concept
ReplyDelete